BOOM! “What was that!” Wendy screamed. Suddenly the lights flickered on and off over and over again until they just it was pitch black. I was sailing on the ship Blue Moon. It was a cruise ship. It was carrying 3,289 guests. Most of my friends were on this ship because our parents bought us all ship tickets to go on holiday by ourselves. Suddenly the ship lurched. Then the microphone said “Everybody get onto the top deck immediately. Put on your life jackets and bring your special valuables if possible. WARNING! WARNING! Get to the top deck immediately!” It repeated that over and over again. “Come on everyone lets get going!” I said. Everyone in my cabin listened. “I’m scared.” said Otoha. “Me too” said everyone else. “Ok up we go.” I said. We tried the elevator but like all the other electronics it wasn’t working. So we had to use the stairs. It took us a while but soon we got there. There was heaps of people all around me. I suddenly got separated from my friends. They had gotten onto the first life boat because they were children. Then as I was rushing towards the boat shouting “Wait! Help me!” But it was to late. It was dropped in the water. As I started crying I got pushed into the icy water. I suddenly fell unconscious but luckily I had my life jacket on otherwise I would’ve drowned. Back on the boat the others didn’t even notice I was gone. Surprisingly Otoha said “Where’s Carys?” Then they all got worried. They thought weird things like Was she eaten by a shark or did she drown? They had no idea.
To Be Continued
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