My Quick write story with similes

 Write your 5 favourite similes here:

1)As difficult as nailing jelly to a tree

2)As pale as death

3)Swim like a fish

4)Shine like diamonds

5)Have eyes like a hawk

Starter

They had always been together, for as long as he could remember. They had always been the best of friends. She had taught him everything he knew, relentlessly preparing him for life in the outside world..

This was the moment they had both been waiting for...

My story Yellow = Similes

I felt a deep sorrow in my heart. I’ve never wanted to leave Lyla alone in the city. We were already a few days from the city. I feel like I’m as pale as death right now. I think she is taking me back to my tower or a special place in the grasslands. “Okay Jasper.” said Lyla. “We only have a few more days left.” “We should rest now it is really late.” “Yes I’m really tired of walking. I need rest.” “Good night Jasper.” “Good night Lyla.” . . . . . . . “Well good morning Lyla.” I licked her face to wake her up from her deep sleep. Then we kept on walking and walking for ages and it felt like we were walking for a month of Sundays. When we arrived to the grasslands, I saw a tower of giraffes. It must be my tower! I started running toward them like I was a bee attracted to a flower. Then I saw one giraffe stand out from the rest, it was my mother! She started running towards me too like we were magnets. We hugged each other so tightly we nearly lost our breath. Then I turned around and saw Lyla crying uncontrollably. She was about to turn around and leave when I ran towards her. We hugged and hugged for as long as a lifetime. “I love you Jasper.” said Lyla in a happy-sad voice. “You know that right?” Yes Lyla I know that and I will never ever forget that. “Goodbye Jasper.” said Lyla. Goodbye Lyla. Then she turned around and started walking towards the city. After a millennium of Sundays I still remember Lyla and her hair as black as coal. Her eyes as beautiful as the ocean, her smile like a ray of sunshine. I will never forget those vivid things about Lyla. Then one day I asked my Mum if I could go on an adventure she said yes. I was as happy as a child on Christmas day. I might see Lyla again!