The engine screamed as the wheels spun round. His heart pounded. Tim knew that he only had seconds to act.
There was a long, moss-covered log wedged underneath the jeep, preventing it from moving. The wheels continued to spin pointlessly, smoke starting to billow out from underneath the bonnet.
A terrifying roar filled his ears, and he knew the monster was right behind him. He could feel the ground shake beneath him as its gigantic feet collided with the ground. He knew what would happen if it caught him, and muttered a prayer beneath his breath.
Tim suddenly found himself lunging forward. He realised that the wheels must finally have found some traction, and he breathed out with relief as he sped off onto the path once again; the wheels of the jeep content to be chewing up the firm gravel once again.
There was a long, moss-covered log wedged underneath the jeep, preventing it from moving. The wheels continued to spin pointlessly, smoke starting to billow out from underneath the bonnet.
A terrifying roar filled his ears, and he knew the monster was right behind him. He could feel the ground shake beneath him as its gigantic feet collided with the ground. He knew what would happen if it caught him, and muttered a prayer beneath his breath.
Tim suddenly found himself lunging forward. He realised that the wheels must finally have found some traction, and he breathed out with relief as he sped off onto the path once again; the wheels of the jeep content to be chewing up the firm gravel once again.
All he had to do was drive. He drove as fast as he could go and he finally found a place to hide. He drove into this big hotel that was strong enough to hold lots of his things on. He really wanted to redo this hotel into a heart warming home. So he quickly drove to his tree house (which he has lived in for 13 years since his mother died) and put all the things in his trailer and hooked it on to the jeep. Then he drove back. He found a wrecking ball and a crane so he hooked the wrecking ball to the crane and he wrecked the hotel and he built his house on really high strong stilts that weren’t actually stilts they were big long blocks of wood. Then finally he was done. Suddenly he heard a loud roar but it wasn’t a T rex it was a Velociraptor. It was only a baby and it was geting chased by a Pachycephalosaurus. I quickly jumped in the jeep and I told the baby Velociraptor to go inside and some how it understood him. Then he called out to the Pachycephalosaurus and then he drove off. He distracted the Pachycephalosaurus and he hid in the bushes. It kept on going. He drove back to his house and he made the Velociraptor his pet for life. They kept on going for walks and they always went hunting They hunted down all the T rexs that were left in the world until there were none left. A century later Tim died by a Pachycephalosaurus. After that the Velociraptor. That was the end for Chewy and Tim.
Written by Carys
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