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Tuesday, 6 August 2019

Fantastic Mr.Fox

                5.8.19
 Kia ora my name is Carys. This is my first               Blog. Chapter chat is were you read books             and read a chapter every day.                                 The book that we're learning about is                       fantastic Mr Fox. The book is about six                   Foxes and three bad men. There names are             Boggis, Bunce and Bean. One fat, one short           and one lean. They wanted to get Mr Fox                 because he was so smart at stealing their                 food. 😀 
         
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 14:51

    Hi Carys

    I like your Fantastic mr. fox story and it’s cool that you described how the 3 men looked like :)
    All your stories show a lot of effort.
    In the fantastic mr. fox blog post it has really big gaps so you could try to fix that up.

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  2. Anonymous13 August 2019 at 14:32

    Hi Carys, I loved your story!!!
    I really enjoyed reading it but next time maybe try and leave smaller gaps.Good job!!!Bye bye ,Ruby X O X O

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  3. Anonymous13 August 2019 at 14:35

    Thank you Ruby. I will try to leave smaller gaps next time.

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  4. Anonymous13 August 2019 at 14:53

    Hi Carys your story has so much detail.When you say Boggis Bunce and Bean one short one fat one lean .
    From Kaia.

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  5. Anonymous23 August 2019 at 09:20

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  6. Anonymous23 August 2019 at 09:21

    Hi Carys! I really like your blog because it has good detail.

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